Thursday, June 10, 2004

We wished upon the same star.
Will I receive all
you asked for?

~another quinzaine...this started as a senryu that came into my head as I was out mowing the lawn. It went something like this...

two dreamers~
each wishes upon
the others star

or maybe...

two dreamers
wish upon
each others star

Not sure which I prefer or if I prefer either! They both feel a tad trite. That is why it ended up morphing into the quinzaine form.

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