Saturday, June 18, 2005

Patience, part two....

Didn't strike me when I was writing it -- I was concerned with getting my 3 stanzas with 3 lines of 3 stresses -- but 'Patience' is very close to being a sijo in form, right down to the twist in the last part. I could change the line breaks and pass it off as one with little or no other editing.

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