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Friday, November 17, 2017

A Choice of Narrators

I faced a dilemma when I began plotting WOMAN OF THE SKY: I had two major characters and was uncertain which to have as narrator of the story. There was Gordie, young castaway turned trader turned king-in-all-but-name, and there was Rahiniti, Kohari dancer adopted into Mora society. Rahiniti has been a unifying character of the Mora Trilogy, but this third and last novel is the one where she steps to center stage.

If Gordie were the main protagonist and first-person narrator, I could go with more direct action and adventure. Yes, the fact that he is male plays a part, but also Rahiniti is simply not the sort to get involved in that sort of thing. She is not trained as a fighter, would not have any reason to be on a battlefield. The female protagonist of the previous novel, ARROWS OF HEAVEN, was a fighter and took part in more than bit of action.

However, Gordie is simply not a very interesting guy to have telling the tale. There is tragedy in his life and he feels the pain of loss, but he is not introspective. He makes his choices and moves on. Rahiniti, on the other hand, has a rich inner life and plenty of thoughts to share. Moreover, she is in a better position to comment on what has gone before, as Gordie was never a part of what went on in the Mora nation, having his own interests well to the north.

So I went with Rahiniti and some major events have to be told third person, rather than directly, by messengers, by friends. We are with Gordie at neither of the naval battles that take place in the first half of the book and must rely on second-hand accounts. Those bits of action in which Rahiniti has a part — kidnapping and assassination attempts, and the like, she observes more than having an active role. If the book sometimes seems closer to a ‘relationship’ novel than a fantasy adventure, so be it.

There is no point in second-guessing these things. I made my choice and moved on, and am not even tempted to change. Currently, I am about two-thirds through the narrative, and expect to finish without any problems — I know where the story is going. Worked that out well ahead of time!

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